Daverom's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The NG Sub]

We all live in a yellow submarine

Nice water effects
Wish I coulda come up with something

[computer graphics second proj]

Alright

So it's a school project, but it's still not your work so you really shouldn't post it
It's just to clearly cropped, and you could get in trouble for it.

peppypippy32 responds:

my teacher said as long as i dont sell it and use less than 75% of the picture, im fine...the pics in the rainbow are my original works, though

[Ult. Nightmare OA: Atom]

Well

Not trying to be harsh but it looks like this took you a few minutes, that's why it's getting zeros, but it doesn't deserve a total zero, but it doesn't deserve to high.
The shading doesn't go very naturally it's just kinda outlining one side, the hands especially the one behind him should have more shading on the side facing us. The major problem and I see this a lot, is the hair and the hat, the hat past the line in the middle, to the left of that line, should be completely shaded, not like the first half, it looks more like a door than a hat. the hair has the opposite problem, the hair has almost no shading in the back.
4/10
2/5

DemitriousDoom responds:

I see. Well okay. Like I said, it was a test, so I'm not mad. At least now I know what I did wrong. Thanks!

[Gluttony]

Amazing

Great concept, what brings this together though is the amazing texture and use of colors, very well done man.

[Cowboy 00]

Style

Great cartoon style, and I like the design of him, kinda reminds me of Hulk Hogan.
Also props on using a cartoon tiger for a reference for a human.

geoxen responds:

Why thank you :)

Guess it sorta does resemble him, didn't see that until now.

Again, thank you :)

[Mouse Guard 2]

Neat

Has that pleasant "children's book" feel to it.

[TriColor Pommegranate]

The shading

I really like the shading style you used to soften the transition betweens colors.
Heres hoping you get in!

J-qb responds:

thanks, originally it was just a harsh transition, but that didnt feel right. I did some crosshatching and it turned out great.

[-RAWR-]

2 colors or not

It looks great, I love things like this that only show the shaded parts of the body, object, etc. Worst comes to worst, if you need to add another color, you could always change the color of your signature.

JKAmovies responds:

Yeah, that's a pretty good idea. But the owner of the collab is cool with just the two colours :)

Thanks^^

[Total Madness 01]

Good

The shading is really nice, seeing semi-realistic madness characters is a nice difference, a realistic madness flash would be pretty interesting.

JKAmovies responds:

Thank you.

That would be very interesting seeing a 'REAL' Madness movie :D

[Vampire]

Looks off

This looks like you drew this with no guidelines, with that being said, this is pretty good for no guidelines, but because of that the anatomy is way offd and he doesn't seem to have much of a neck.

ansemriku10 responds:

Haha yeah I know it looks stupid and for this one Id rather not have guidelines.