Daverom's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ult. Nightmare OA: Atom]

Well

Not trying to be harsh but it looks like this took you a few minutes, that's why it's getting zeros, but it doesn't deserve a total zero, but it doesn't deserve to high.
The shading doesn't go very naturally it's just kinda outlining one side, the hands especially the one behind him should have more shading on the side facing us. The major problem and I see this a lot, is the hair and the hat, the hat past the line in the middle, to the left of that line, should be completely shaded, not like the first half, it looks more like a door than a hat. the hair has the opposite problem, the hair has almost no shading in the back.
4/10
2/5

DemitriousDoom responds:

I see. Well okay. Like I said, it was a test, so I'm not mad. At least now I know what I did wrong. Thanks!

[Cowboy 00]

Style

Great cartoon style, and I like the design of him, kinda reminds me of Hulk Hogan.
Also props on using a cartoon tiger for a reference for a human.

geoxen responds:

Why thank you :)

Guess it sorta does resemble him, didn't see that until now.

Again, thank you :)

[TriColor Pommegranate]

The shading

I really like the shading style you used to soften the transition betweens colors.
Heres hoping you get in!

J-qb responds:

thanks, originally it was just a harsh transition, but that didnt feel right. I did some crosshatching and it turned out great.

[-RAWR-]

2 colors or not

It looks great, I love things like this that only show the shaded parts of the body, object, etc. Worst comes to worst, if you need to add another color, you could always change the color of your signature.

JKAmovies responds:

Yeah, that's a pretty good idea. But the owner of the collab is cool with just the two colours :)

Thanks^^

[Total Madness 01]

Good

The shading is really nice, seeing semi-realistic madness characters is a nice difference, a realistic madness flash would be pretty interesting.

JKAmovies responds:

Thank you.

That would be very interesting seeing a 'REAL' Madness movie :D

[Vampire]

Looks off

This looks like you drew this with no guidelines, with that being said, this is pretty good for no guidelines, but because of that the anatomy is way offd and he doesn't seem to have much of a neck.

ansemriku10 responds:

Haha yeah I know it looks stupid and for this one Id rather not have guidelines.

[how to draw iron man]

Love me some vectoring

This is what vector should be, clean and simple, also showing how you did it is nice, not enough people know how simple it is to do, but how easy it is to overdo.
5/5 and 9/10

bennadrom responds:

i think i should make an animation thx

[The Invincible Iron Man]

Amazing

You have talent that much is obvious, maybe one of the best on the site, the only problem I have with this is that he seems a little too jacked, his torso just seems to wide to me.

Nekow responds:

he's INVINCIBLE, so he should look like a freaking body-builder in my opinion :)

[Good Things Come in Threes]

Great

Took me a second to see what it was, still not sure, but for what I think it is, it's very nice

Captain responds:

lol thanks, it's Siamese triplets

[iron man without lines]

Lines off

This one looks better, with all the lines it looks more sloppy, but if you can keep some of the lines for detail too

bennadrom responds:

thx will keep that in mind